But most read like they were written by someone who’s hoping no one actually applies.
“We’re looking for a motivated team player with a proven track record…”
Great. That’s every job ever.
If you want top sales talent, write like you actually want them to apply. As a sales recruiting partner to 150+ tech companies, we’ve seen what works — and what repels top performers.
Skip the fluffy mission talk. Candidates want to know: why now, why you, why this role?
Examples that work:
Don’t write like a recruiter. Write like a founder who just raised a seed round and is hiring their first closer.
Stop dumping a dozen bullet points with “you will...”
Instead, describe what the role looks like in real life.
Make it tangible:
This is what real closers want to see. If that’s not in your job ad, you’re losing serious talent before the first screening call.
Ditch the “responsibilities” and “qualifications” section headers. Flip the script.
What you’ll get:
What will make you successful here:
Don’t hide comp. Don’t make them guess.
Sample:
This builds trust — and filters out people who aren’t serious.
Sales hires care deeply about the context. Reflect that in your copy.
Early-stage version:
You’ll be our first sales hire. Total ownership, zero red tape. If you want stability, this isn’t for you.
Mid-market version:
We’re rebuilding our GTM motion. You’ll be the tip of the spear in transforming how we sell.
Your vacancy isn’t a job post. It’s a landing page. And its only job is to convert.
Ditch the jargon. Keep it clear. Give them a reason to act.
Writing a strong job ad isn’t just about words — it’s about knowing what top performers actually look for.
Ready to stop wasting time on candidates who can’t close?
At FOUND, we don’t send resumes. We deliver closers.